I've figured out my issues with The Sentence and revamped the beginning. My plan was originally to start in the middle of a particular fight scene, end the chapter on a cliffhanger distress call, then jump to another character to give the backstory on what happened.
Now, I've set the book several days earlier, show the actual backstory as story, and inserted another, smaller fight scene that forces the launch of the plot.
Saturday, May 15, 2010
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