I'm pretty sure I'm going with this

I've come up with a pretty solid Sentence to describe the main plot. It's tight and hits all the high points, but I think it may be a bit dry and even a teensy bit wordy. I've also nailed down quite a few Scene Sentences (one sentence that sums up all the content in a given scene). I'm thinking that my "Scenes" will be most of a chapter, and each one is looking to average out at 2,500 words.